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Dec 26, 2016 12:12:05 GMT
Post by Deleted on Dec 26, 2016 12:12:05 GMT
I've realised that I have lost myself, I wish I could be like everyone else, but right now I'm empty
I try to change each day of my life, Yet somehow I don't have the willingness to fight, so I'm still feeling empty
I've seen so many people content as their dream came true, I'm wondering if I could be like that too, But my dreams are nowhere to be seen, so that leaves me to be empty
I can't live like this forever, I need to enjoy each day no matter the weather, I will try my best to not give up, and to not feel empty
Now I will live each day like it's my past, Forgetting about the ways of my past, I shall no longer be empty
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The weather atm is atrocious! More to come, hopefully NOT!
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Jan 5, 2017 13:44:02 GMT
Post by Carly Apple on Jan 5, 2017 13:44:02 GMT
Really well written and emotion inducing poem! I can sense a heartache in your words. Yet the ending has a refreshing self empowerment feel. I like! Great job! Would love to see more!
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Post by Ray on Jan 9, 2017 20:43:30 GMT
Did you write this yourself?? It's pretty good Sad but good
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Jan 11, 2017 5:27:13 GMT
Ray likes this
Post by Deleted on Jan 11, 2017 5:27:13 GMT
thanks! I wrote this when I was upset for some reason I forgot why lmfao. but ayyy i'm happy right now 2017 is LIT great!
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